Planing: ideas

planning ideas

First Idea

• Narration of current character
• I was only 19 when I saw my dad being taking to hospital, i didn't know this would be the last time i ever saw him alive. (muffled coughing
• Cuts between now and flashback
• Up and coming racer crashes because dad dies, now he's back for first race since injury
• FLASHBACK:
• WAS:young, over confident (stupid because young), not afraid of anything.
• brother telling him there dad died.
• Filming pictures of dad and son
• Walking towards car, getting ready for the race.
• Newspaper, "CRUSHING NEWS, young racer's dad dies of cancer, leading to a near-fatal crash

Showing crash - long shot of car, commentator talking over it . cuts to black screen with crash sound happens and echo's out, then fades to several newspapers in a close up and medium shots, with sirens and screams. Narration over the top?

Second Idea:

ALL FLASHBACK,
engaged girlfriend: just broke it off,
Filming pictures of gf and bf
Argument

Third idea

• Driver out of racing
• injured bad
• Narration over the top - "the worst thing that could of happened to me, happened 10 years ago on this day"
• "But it wasn't too bad, as now I own the greatest racing team in f1, and this is my story of my days in racing, and my days after"
• Owns a racing team now

Forth idea

Filming pics of dad, coughing, crys, he dies.

racer is heartbroken, but he has a race coming up so he needs to get his head sorted.

"It was the day before my big race when my life was turned upside down" dad dies

"Now i have to do my dad proud, and answer all the critics that thought i wouldn't race"

"This is my time, im doing this for my dad" FADES TO BLACK, TITLES COME UP 

"Unbreakable